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Reviewer: ypMs Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Flight Delayed

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Reviewer: Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 8: Terrors

he's so loving and understanding

Reviewer: JGRchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 8: Terrors

Good thing Ryan was there to help her and glad that she has him and his family and her friends so that she is not alone as he pointed out. Great job as always can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: JGRchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 7: Shopping Trip

Glad to see a update hoping they can get their baby who would be a mircle baby.



Author's Response:

I can't update as often as I used to before the season, but going to try and post at least one chapter for each story each week :)

Reviewer: Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2016 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 7: Shopping Trip

awww, they are so sweet together

Reviewer: JGRchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 6: Atlanta

Aw Snowball sounds so cute and that's so sweet that they adopted a little cat. Can't wait to see how little Snowball fits into the family.

Reviewer: Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 6: Atlanta

awww, Snowball sounds adorable

Reviewer: Kligermanfan29 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5: Daytona

Maybe Devon should get a therapy dog or cat to help with her issues. Also you kept referring to Ryan as her boyfriend but they're engaged now so isn't her boyfriend anymore.



Author's Response:

That is true - it is her fiance, not boyfriend ;) It just seems odd with Ryan being engaged due to the youth in the story so hence my fact of writing "boyfriend" versus "fiance". Try to get that right for the next update ;) I like the therapy animal suggestion, though. 

Reviewer: JGRchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5: Daytona

Poor Devon and Ryan hate seeing Devon so frusterated and Ryan is right loosing is never fun.

Reviewer: Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: Daytona

awwww, hopefully the normalcy returns soon

Reviewer: JGRchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 4: Nervousness

Aw that was so sweet of him to cancel his plans to be with Devon she's lucky to have him.

Reviewer: Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 4: Nervousness

awww, he's  so sweet with her

Reviewer: JGRchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 3: Girl Talk

Glad to see Devon having some girl time together with her friends and having some girl time.

Reviewer: johncena88 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 2: Cycles and Pregnancy Test....

i love the being of this story, can you keep updating.



Author's Response:

That's the plan. Depending on my schedule, I am aiming to have another chapter up either this week, or early next week at the latest.

Reviewer: JGRchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 2: Cycles and Pregnancy Test....

Okay well that answered the question of it she was or wasn't glad that she seems to be getting better about handling stuff realted to the attack.



Author's Response:

They say time heals wounds, or at least makes it easier to take it all in. Slowly but surely, it seems that is her case.

Reviewer: Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: Cycles and Pregnancy Test....

aww, can't wait until they get to have a baby.



Author's Response:

Hopefully soon

Reviewer: JGRchick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Flight Delayed

Aw that is so sweet that she wants him to be their and can't wait to find out the results. Poor them with the delayed flight though just when they need it and i hope Devon is okay on her own yes she needs to get used to it but i think this early on she needs to be a little easier on her self and accept the friends to stay at least until Ryan gets home which with this delayed flight who knows when that may be.



Author's Response:

Good suggestions :)

Reviewer: Kligermanfan29 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Flight Delayed

How does she not know what her cycle entails? She should know her cycle by now.



Author's Response:

Some girls do not keep specific track of their cycle. 

Reviewer: Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Flight Delayed

awwwwww times a million. They're adorable

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