Date: May 22, 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
Oh dear i bet Kaleen is at the door and right before he was going to tell Brynne but she won't believe he was going to tell her. Please let me be wrong because otherwise i sense a real rough point in thier relationship. If that isn't Kaleen Martin must tell Brynne tonight as hard as it is to say she'd rather learn from him then anyone else.
Date: April 07, 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Yikes Martin you have to tell her about Kaleen she took Peyton well granted that Deanna isn't a pest or brat but still he has to tell her she does seem to be the good luck charm was not expecting it to skip to the race though.
Date: April 01, 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Aw Peyton is the sweetest little thing i love her so much and i'm glad Brynne and Deanna are getting along. If Kaleen is the stripper that would make so much sense but i'm not positive that's who Deanna is talking about. I bet Peyton and Brynne will get along great and it would be so sweet if they did.
Date: March 31, 2017 11:18 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Kaleen is just plain crazy not a bit i hope Martin can work out a plan to get to see Peyton more it's obvious she needs it and they have such a cute relationship together. Can't wait to learn more about her and Deanna and see how Brynne fits in the picture.
Date: March 30, 2017 12:57 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Love the background on Deana and Peyton, and love that Martin will do anything for that little girl. It all sounds perfect - even how Brynne took the news, and possibly heading home to meet his family. Now if only we could rid of the other snag in the equation ;)
Date: March 29, 2017 10:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Glad she has reacted to Peyton so well and it sounds like Deanna makes it real easy to get along and is supportive of Brynne have to wonder what will happen with Martin's other baby since no one knows about that baby at all. Glad that despite racing he has still magnaged to keep in contact and have a realtionship with Peyton. Hope Brynne goes home with him can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: March 29, 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Woah wait, hold on. Deana has Peyton who is his daugther. Then there's the other chica walking around pregnant with his kid. And now there's Brynne in the midst of this?
Holy crap boy!
I don't want to be him when Brynne finds out all the details and kicks his ass because this is just a mess.