Date: September 15, 2017 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
Maybe Nick could jilt her and then she can stop the lies. I read an Amish story in which the woman jilted the man. Even if that's a different type of story, jilting at the altar can happen in a story. I wish Trinity would realize she's more lovable than she believes, at least.
Date: August 19, 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
hahaha I absolutely love the relationship amongst the teammates and agree that Chad is just focused on Emily so he can try and forget Trinity. And why do I have a feeling that Jimmie will end up at the wedding with him?
Date: June 14, 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
I like that prayer. I mean, I believe in God and prayer and such. Maybe this will lead to them having some type of relationship, whether good buds or something more.
Thank you, I just reworded the prayer to fit the scene but this prayer was said at my dad's viewing/funeral when he passed two years ago....I thought it was fitting for this chapter.
Date: June 02, 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Maybe Trinity's man will break off the relationship and Chad and Emily won't go beyond this point. Either that or Trinity and Chad are buds and she marries her current man. Chad could either keep Emily or find a new girlfriend.